Original story
My kids wanted a cat. I agreed. I got one, his name is Tiger, and he is a unique pet.
Student Question (there were almost 20 and this was the one I chose)
"How did your kids persuade you?"
Revision
Every day, from sunrise to late at night, my whiny children pleaded, begged for a pet. I mechanically responded, "no." Eventually, as they probably expected, I wore down. The constant pleas finally broke me until I too believed I desperately needed an animal in my already crowded apartment.
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